Golden moon of Pentaxia

I think this deviation is really great in a lot of ways. I love the detail of the moons behind the girls. I love the colors of the background scene, and I love the sunset. You did a fantastic job blending the girls together and into the scene. I see no loose edges and the shadows all feel real. That said I felt as if the girls look too white compared to the scene around them. I wanted more of that yellow glow to touch their skin. I also think you could have roughed up the computer graphic stock, especially the window deciders. That texture looks very simple and one dimensional. Maybe some texture or additional shading would have helped. Overall though this is really flipping awesome. Brava!